10 Secrets For
Writing Killer Complaint Letters
by Shaun Fawcett
Complaint letters aren’t always fun, but sometimes they need to be
written.
In many
cases, if people don’t complain, the problem agency at fault (i.e.
company or government) won’t even know that the problem you and
others may have experienced, even exists.
Ultimately, legitimate complaints, by even a few people, can (and
often do) result in better service for everybody. Not only that,
writing them can be personally beneficial too!
That’s right. Writing complaint letters can be an empowering
and therapeutic experience!
It allows one to take action instead of playing the role of a
victim and “nursing” an ongoing resentment towards a company about
poor service or treatment received. Once the complaint letter is
written and in the mail one can “let it go” knowing that one has
done something tangible and constructive about the situation.
Not only that, but properly written and handled complaint letters
get action!
After I started writing complaint letters, I began receiving
gracious letters of apology and contrition from senior executives
including bank vice-presidents and VPs of marketing for giant
corporations.
Getting those, felt one heck of a lot better than “polishing” an
ongoing resentment and getting even angrier the next time something
bad happened. Sometimes I even get discount coupons and free
merchandise!
Here are some strategies I have learned for writing complaint
letters that are guaranteed to get attention and action.
1. Write to the senior person responsible.
It is important that you get the name and detailed mailing
address of a very senior person responsible for the product or
service that you are complaining about. I generally try to write to
the V.-P. level. Never go below Director level if you want a serious
response. Name and address information can be obtained from the
organization’s Web site or by calling the company and asking for the
name and title of the senior person who you should write to.
2. Don’t send an e-Mail.
When it comes to sending a serious complaint to a company, don’t
send an e-mail, regardless of what it may say on their Web site.
E-mails are usually handled dismissively by low level “customer
service” people. If you want serious attention and action, the
formal written complaint letter is the only way to go. (yes, by
snail mail!). When it arrives in the VP's office, it triggers a
bureaucratic process that ensures that the right people will see
your letter, and will act on it.
3. Keep it as short as possible.
Preferably no longer than one page, two at the most. When
drafting a complaint letter there can be a tendency to go on and on
just to make sure the recipient gets the point. Keep it as short as
possible, but without diluting the facts of your message too much.
4. Give it a heading for identification.
Place a heading at the top of the letter with information that
the company or agency will relate to, such as your account number or
customer number. Make it easy for them to find you on their computer
filing system.
5. Clearly explain the situation.
Make sure that you give all of the specific details needed so
that the company/agency can verify your claim without you having to
get into an endless game of telephone tag with them. Include
specific dates, times and places, as well as the names of people you
dealt with. If you’re not sure of these when composing the letter,
call them back and ask for the specifics. (You don’t have to say
it’s for a complaint letter).
6. Use a positive and respectful tone.
I have found that the best approach is to use a positive upbeat
tone. Remember, you are writing to a senior person who probably
sympathizes with what happened to you. Your tone should convey the
message that you are the innocent victim and you understand that the
company wouldn’t have done such a thing deliberately.
7. Send copies if appropriate.
There can be cases where it is wise to send a copy of the letter
to other parties just to make sure that you will get some serious
action. For example, in a case where you have been told to write to
a Regional Manager of a program, it is often a good idea to make
sure that someone in head office also gets a copy. I sometimes send
a copy to customer services or customer relations, offices at the
national level.
8. “Shame” them as much as possible.
Companies that claim and advertise high levels of customer focus
and service do not like to be criticized in those areas. If you have
a strong case that makes them vulnerable in one of these areas, use
as much ammunition as you can to embarrass them in these sensitive
areas. Modern marketing terms such as: Customer Relationship
Management (CRM), one-to-one marketing, Most Valuable Customer (MVC),
and customer-centric focus, all tend to get their attention. Also,
using such terms makes you look like an authority.
9. Imply you might take your business elsewhere.
I always do this near the closing. Companies don’t like to lose
customers, especially long-time customers. Senior marketing people
are well aware that study after study has shown that it costs five
to seven times as much to recruit a new customer as it does to hold
on to an existing one.
10. Ask for an early reply.
In the closing paragraph of your complaint letter, state
specifically that you are expecting an early reply. Make sure that
you follow-up by phone or e-mail if you have heard nothing in three
weeks. Some companies will send you an acknowledgement letter
stating that they are working on your case and will get back to you
within a week or two.
Use the above strategies and you are sure to get action from your
complaint letters.
And, don’t forget the old truism “the squeaky wheel gets the
grease”!
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Article adapted from Shaun Fawcett's new one-stop writing help
e-book "Instant Home Writing Kit". The Kit is full of tips, tricks,
and secrets on how to write personal and business letters, resumes,
cvs, papers, e-mails, essays, and business reports. Includes dozens
of fully-formatted downloadable real-life templates. Check out this
time/money-saver at: http://www.instanthomewritingkit.com/